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标题: 灭了形容词 [打印本页]

作者: jssh365    时间: 2014-6-2 09:11
标题: 灭了形容词
灭了形容词


看到一本书的题目:When You Catch an Adjective, Kill It: The Parts of Speech, forBetter And/Or Worse,於我心有戚戚焉。我也是——至少在科研论文里——反对用形容词的。形容词如果不是假大空的就是朦胧美的,不适合用来描述科学事实。事实只需要简单的数据就够了。这几天听地震的新闻发布会,废话连篇,记者都听腻了,就是形容功能的零碎儿太多。语言污染比环境污染还可恶。
题目是借了马克吐温的句子。老马1880年春给D W Bowser写信说,你的语言直白简单,小词小句子,是写作的正道,要坚持。别让废话和花里胡哨的东西溜进来。如果感染了形容词,就把它灭了……人如果染上了爱形容的毛病,就像N11H13一样很难克服了。
I notice that you use plain, simple language, short words and brief sentences.That is the way to write English -- it is the modern way and the best way.Stick to it; don't let fluff and flowers and verbosity creep in. [url=]When you catch an adjective[/url], kill it. No, Idon't mean utterly, but kill most of them -- then the rest will be valuable.They weaken when they are close together. They give strength when they are wideapart. An adjective habit, or a wordy, diffuse, flowery habit, once fastened upon a person, is as hard to get rid of as any other vice.
过去常说文如其人,如今文字的个性少了,共性多了——甚至有时还“共形”(这倒顺应了数学物理的潮流)——分不清不同的风格流派,只能分空话和废话多的和少的。空话多的是领导还没做到家的,废话多的则是科学家做过了头的。






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